In Cinquain, edited
October 28th, 2007
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no where
have I found
so much sincere beauty
like in a child’s face
shot
frozen
beautiful
fearless warrior
eye to eye we meet
As submitted to InCinq.blogspot.com. First poem done on a word count second one is syllabic.
shot
fearless warrior
eye to eye
we meet
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I think I played with this poem for a good three days and a couple of pages in my journal. Above is the published version in InCinq.blogspot.
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October 29th, 2007 at 1:34 am
wow clau cute kids. wonderful shots. are they from korea?
October 31st, 2007 at 1:46 am
Yes!! I love my job, the kids are awesome, and they have so much character.
November 12th, 2007 at 5:52 pm
I like the inCinq project. For you Claudia that might be so easy to compose a soneto to fill up the requirements. Enjoy Asia!